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Monday 22 June 2015

Moment in time

BMX track fears

4 comments:

  1. Wow awesome work Te.Nice to know you've faced your faces.You could enhance this writing a little more by adding more wow words.Great work!!

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  2. Hi Te Tamati,
    What I like about it is the discription word I love it. Mabey you should work on your Punctuation Like your fullstops at the end of a sentence.

    From Punatahi

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